Leah–Thank you so much for taking the time to review my entry on the Casa Author blog this weekend, and for providing all of us with your insights and suggestions. What a wonderful opportunity to see through the editor’s eyes! I’ve learned much from reading your comments and plan to take a close look at my hero to be sure the darkness in his story is balanced by his strengths. This beginning is from a work in progress, and it’s going to be a while before I’m really ready to submit. Would you still be willing to look at it later? And if so, could I remind you of this critique session in my query? Either way, I do appreciate the time and energy you’ve given this session, and the incredible opportunity you have offered all of us!
Thank you so much!